Joined: Feb 2006 Gender: Male Posts: 4 Location: Kentucky Karma: 0
Ladies « Result #1 on Feb 9, 2006, 4:57pm »
I need advice and you do too......... But whenever I write can you feel me?
To long you have suffered the touch of a man's lustful hands and the niggas that are unaware of what love is.....
It causes you to be desenthisized to the feel of honest emotional affections....
Ladies....... Feel This Man!
Ladies, please give me one chance and I'll take you to a place where lost memories are remembered!
Let our spirits transfer from the line of visual communication that momentarily connects us as If we were online
As we search each others presence for words of appreciation and acknowledgment of an attraction only to be disrupted by a breath and reconnected by a blink
I must know, Do you want to feel this man?
I want to walk down oral paths contaminated with comments hoping to be afflicted into a conversation with you whenever our thoughts touch
And let every consultation consist of giving you a verbal visual of how I see you. Because you are beautiful!
I want to kiss the open space of your mind and taste the flavor lipstick of your thoughts.
As I touch you with words with no expiration date so you could feel them like they were written on you and never worry about their affect on you expiring.
And every interaction doesn’t have to consist of our exchange.
I could breathe in a chest full of your silence and not get choked up to hear a sound.
Can you feel me now?
Let me come close enough to whisper new breath in your lungs.
While I rub your feet to soothe the sole of your complications.
Gliding my fingers up the length of your arms to slightly touching the nape of your neck
while my other hand hold firm position of the security of my presence on the small of your back so you would know I have you.
As I soothe the goose bumps on your skin by feeding them the butterflies in your stomach.
Continuing to trace circles on the back of your hand, drawing lines on your stomach.
Solving the mathematical equations of your isosceles triangle with a kiss.
Outline your tattoos with my tongue adding color of passion to it with my lips.
The pressing of soft lips on the base of your collar bone.
Can you feel me now?
Come closer to me so are nose to nose and eye to eye.
Let me breathe your air and you breathe mine.
Let me see myself in your eyes and you can look to see how beautiful you are in mine. Let my hands rub your waist line, an inch higher while the other moves an inch lower increasing the acceleration of your breathing.
And for the first time let my lips absorb the feel of your lips.
Like they were looking for simply the most beautiful, impressive, widely effective mode of saying that which is lost in translation.
To taste the full intent of the content in your mentioned and silenced statements.
Now embrace the nectar of my lips, drink passionately from its fountain of desire.
Can you feel me now?
Lay in symmetry, exposed to the world re birth in a new emotion.
As I paint your body with warm baby oil, using water lilies as the brush.
Long strokes that cover your entire frame, 2 to 3 coats I’m in no rush.
Be the single rose that lies in my bed and I will be the thorns wrapped around you so not just anyone can touch your petals.
Can you feel me now?
Now feel the realms of nature as things rise and fall.
To be your gardener, dig in your gravel to plant seeds of my affection deep with in your core.
Enter your forest and plant my root in the girth of your earth and grow from the endless fall of rain on my stem.
Weeding past any obstacles, watering you with my attention so when it’s our season I can harvest crops of your love.
And allow your sexual frustration to be relieved in movements of easing back slow, and facial expression, closed eyes, scrunching face, mouth open and a stuttering sigh.
And if slippery when wet just lift, shimmy or shift to the side to allow things to fall back into place.
Don’t move, just feel the energy soaring throw you from a natural throbbing motion.
Joined: Feb 2006 Gender: Male Posts: 4 Location: Kentucky Karma: 0
Sex « Result #2 on Feb 9, 2006, 4:55pm »
i wanna spend a moment exploring that sexy ass body of yours for a very strong man, my body and my hands are unique never underestimate because there is no man that can comprehend with the skills, with the length with the sweet techniques of dr. go deep there is no flaws when it comes to make'n your toes curl like curly fries, baby i wanna cherish everything about you from the way you smell have you sprung from the way you'll be held the way your skin feels against mines and the tones you'll yell when you call me papi and i love the way you yell give it to me when i f### you enough of the sexual repression school is out dick is in your p#### spread wide open and all across the scoreboards I'll have your tens i'll work that fine ass so damn good, your mother would have to knock on wood but wow! here i am in this flesh giving you breath let me work my lips across your skin next my tongue across your nipples and clit next my long dick inside providing you a very unbelieveable ride damn, that's good sex and i won't stop until i have not one bar on my service left go ahead and say what you feel it's more than writings that can kill me my sex my dick my soul my game is so unreal so go ahead and put your pretty titties up in my grill and i'll keep you so wet, your p#### juice will drip drop like raindrops and right in front of your face i'll lick it up and eat again it until your p#### pops i am so skilled when it comes to workin the monajae t### rip this beater off and have you runnin across the border and i ain't talkin about for a fajita either my sexual skills will break you deep baby and deeper..... and deeper....... like that........ and on and on i'll go until you start speakin in tongues even have you where you can't speak, your knees weak even when it's your friends your among one woman can't get enough of Romeo whenever we boning, yo I' am blessed to give unbelievable romance unbelievable friendship unbelievable, oh boy unbelievable, yesssss sex!
Joined: Feb 2006 Gender: Male Posts: 4 Location: Kentucky Karma: 0
Re: Get to know the new members - First: tis me! « Result #3 on Feb 9, 2006, 4:49pm »
My name is Romeo and I'm originally from Queens,NY. I just turned 20 Feb 1st and I'm enlightned to join this room to see what's it about. I currently am enrolled in college in Kentucky at The University Of Louisville. I am a spoken word poet, soon to release my most anticipated books and I'm workin on music.
I'm Dominican and African American Hazel eyes, dimples, nice smile, long braided hair same length, edge up and style like Omarion 6ft even and athleticially built....... I am look foward to gettin to know many people here and getting as well as giving great feedback!
Joined: Apr 2005 Gender: Female Posts: 5 Location: I am not to sure at the moment Karma: 0
untitled « Result #5 on Jul 8, 2005, 1:26pm »
The mother cries for her babies Hurt by cruelties of a cold world.
The moon cries for mother earth who has been packed up, vacum sealed, shipped off somewhere.
The hobo cries for the business man Confined to crunching numbers in cubicles Sealing them off from the world never seeing its beauty. But the business man condemns the free spirit as a bum.
The poets cry for suburbia Living in their fake realm of happiness Behind their white picket fences Who only accept conformity to the jones' standards And are never free.
The world weeps for us Always stuck between the tracks and never free. Zombies slowly creeping through Just copies of each other, brainwashed by the media. But we never cry for anything but ourselves.
we don't own the earth we just borrow it from our children. Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. I'm not off beat!I'm marching to the beat of my own drum!
Re: George Bush Lines « Result #19 on Jun 23, 2005, 1:10pm »
When meeting the President of South Korea tod discuss the importance of the nuclear power... "Are you from good Korea or bad Korea?" (this pissed quite a people off)
Peck Peck Peck *Sizzle* « Result #22 on Jun 22, 2005, 8:45pm »
An Explosive Yard
Peck peck peck *BANG* Stupid chicken It walked into my backyard Dig dig dig *SIZZLE* The sun came out Detonated another land mine And then my dog fried for it Swim swim swim *TIDAL WAVE* The lemonade in the glass dripped out Of the cracks caused by another boom And my little brother flew to Chicago (...) "Daughter rake the lawn" my daddy says "... NUUUUUUUUUUUH UHHHH" I reply If I go out on a Tuesday and Miss Harris is watering her lawn Then the land mines to the west will blow But if I rake on a rainy Sunday in January Then the land mines will be silent... I live atop an area which I didn't even know In a strange city after World War two I guess they ran out of money Or maybe they burned their cash But they forgot to clear the area of land mines No pool parties for me
I hate you my friend « Result #24 on Jun 10, 2005, 7:38pm »
Hello my friend I hope you are well. I have something I've been wanting to tell you! I hate you. I hate the way you smile The way you talk, your face Your attitude towards life [positive] Your suck-uppy-ness towards others Your charm, you grace The way you smell Like lilacs and baby powder And most of all I hate the way you talk "Thank you so much!" and "I'm incredibly sorry, please forgive me" No my dearest friend, forgive me For being there for you when you cried For being your friend Your emotional counselor Your helpful advisor And your matchmaker ... Well, I'll call you later!
Joined: May 2005 Gender: Male Posts: 61 Location: Somewhere in the Dulcimer... Karma: 0
Simple and Clean (Kingdom Hearts Title Song) « Result #39 on May 29, 2005, 5:34pm »
This is the song that plays in the beginning of Kingdom Hearts... It is by Utada Hikaru... Here it goes:
You're giving me too many things Lately you're all I need You smilied at me and said,
Don't get me wrong I love you But does that mean I have to meet your father? When we are older you'll understand What I meant when I said, "No, I don't think life is quite that simple"
When you walk away You don't hear me say please Oh baby, don't go Simple and clean is the way you're making me feel tonight It's hard to let it go
The daily things that keep us all busy Are confusing me That's when you cam to me and said,
Wish I could prove I love you But does that mean I have to walk on water? When we are older you'll understand It's enough when I say so And maybe some things are that simple
When you walk away You don't hear me say please Oh baby, don't go Simple and clean is the way you're making me feel tonight It's hard to let it go
Hold me Whatever lies beyond this morning Is a little later on Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all Nothing's like before
When you walk away You don't hear me say please Oh baby, don't go Simple and clean is the way you're making me feel tonight It's hard to let it go
When you walk away You don't hear me say please Oh baby, don't go Simple and clean is the way you're making me feel tonight It's hard to let it go
When you walk away You don't hear me say please Oh baby, don't go Simple and clean is the way you're making me feel tonight It's hard to let it go
Joined: May 2005 Gender: Male Posts: 61 Location: Somewhere in the Dulcimer... Karma: 0
Random Chat « Result #41 on May 29, 2005, 5:23pm »
This is where you randomly chat with no main point such as:
Person 1: I like pie! Person 2: I like pie too! Person 1: Pie is cool! Person 2: Yeah, it is... Person 3: Anyone know where I can find etc. etc. etc...
So, I start: I think we need more members... Hey! I have more posts than the admin! Thweet!
Joined: May 2005 Gender: Male Posts: 61 Location: Somewhere in the Dulcimer... Karma: 0
Re: You promise me the world « Result #45 on May 29, 2005, 5:10pm »
I agree with hekategirl that the format was a little bumpy, but it was good overall. I remember in school when the creative expressions class read poems like this... This was truly great.
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Re: All the Things I See « Result #48 on May 29, 2005, 5:06pm »
O.O This one scared me for some reason... I don't know how... But, I imagine you walking down the street past Brian's house dragging a blanky and sucking your thumb... Don't ask.
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Re: All I want is you, Sean « Result #49 on May 29, 2005, 5:05pm »
HEY!!! TBR DIES NOW!!! I loved the poem, and obviously it is a deep one, as of the category, and I agree that the line breaks were akward, but I say it goes with a style...
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Re: Ladies and Gentlemen, please welcome « Result #63 on May 29, 2005, 4:48pm »
HEY! You forgot to mention Avril as your IDOL and that you worship things... Everyone worships things... Like Me mum's bunny slippers... They rule ALL!!!
Re: All I want is you, Sean « Result #68 on May 26, 2005, 10:14pm »
Wow I really liked this and I can totally relate to it when it came to the whole grin to serious part. I wish SOME PEOPLE :looks around: would sometimes mature though, instead of act goofy because I see them all the time goofy and not serious or visa versa. Lovely.
Joined: Apr 2005 Gender: Female Posts: 3 Location: The Windy City Karma: 0
Re: All I want is you, Sean « Result #69 on May 23, 2005, 8:22pm »
This was really pretty. I loved some of your lines and such but I'm not sure if you wanted this to be formatted as a normal poem or as a different one 'cause if you want to be normally formatted, the line breaks are very awkward Very good job
Joined: Apr 2005 Gender: Female Posts: 27 Location: A place where dreams go to die Karma: 0
All I want is you, Sean « Result #76 on May 18, 2005, 7:03pm »
Your perfect face and your short ragged hair are always shaking from laughter,
Whats so funny?
your tounge sticks out as you fall over backwards into a heap of garvel
Don't do this to me
I walk towards the plastic bench where you sit reading, wating for me. your face is not goofy nor is your tounge sticking out,
Why can't you act like this when I talk you, why can't you act normal, Sean? Why can't I see your face without a stupid grin? Why can't I? you show your serious side to Emad, but not me, why? are you trying to make me laugh, Sean? because its not funny anymore.
Sometimes I need you to be serious, Sean, sometimes I need you to be there for me
But your never there.
You know who's there, Sean? Goofy grin guy that doesn't think straight.
I want SEAN to come out,
I want you to know that you don't need to act silly around me.
But as hard as I try, you won't let me see your other side, the side that I can talk to, I can't talk to this side, Sean
i'm crying as I write this because all I want is you to be my friend, I don't want a comedian, Sean at least not all the time, Sean, all I want is you.
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Turn Beuty Inside Out Day « Result #77 on May 18, 2005, 7:00pm »
Today is Turn Beuty Inside Out Day, a day that was created by New Moon Magizine to celebrate all kinds of beuty, and to encourage girls and women not to belive that they have to look like all the "perfect" women and girls that the media is constantly giving us, and to just be themselves. You can find out more at this website:
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Re: You promise me the world « Result #78 on May 18, 2005, 3:29pm »
A little bumpy in parts but very good, but maybe reformat it like this:
Dad you always promise the world to me, Yet you never gave me the world, When I was young I learned that your promises were always talk. You always had good intentions, But thats what they always were, Good intentions. As I grew up I learned that I could never trust you, Each time you yelled at me you hurt me more, I soon lost all respect for you, When you hurt mom I wanted you to just go away, But you didn't. I told you how I hated what you did to us, But you didn't listen, You said it was all mom's fault, You told your side of the story, The wrong distorted version. I told you how I hated seeing you, But you have never listened to me, So why would I expect you to listen, You said you would see me no matter what, You said you would get a court order and make me go. You have hurt me so much as I grew up, But now you're trying to make those years go away, But those years will never go away, They are imprinted in my memory forever. I just want to wish you away.
Re: Ladies and Gentlemen, please welcome « Result #87 on May 16, 2005, 8:11pm »
me either... I can't believe some people dont' like music at all. Even brad likes music and you'd think he doesn't... but he does... :twilight zone music plays:
HOW DO YOU CHANGE YOU AVATAR?!?!?! Why don't you ever keep the same name man... i thought you were shadown knight but he doens't like poetry so it would contradict him if he checked this out.
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1000 Words « Result #100 on May 15, 2005, 3:06pm »
1000 Words
I know that you're hiding things, Using gentle words to shelter me. Your words were like a dream. But dreams could never fool me, Not that easily. I acted so distant then, Didn't say goodbye before you left. But I was listening; You'll fight your battles far from me, Far too easily. "Save your tears 'cause I'll come back." I could hear that you whispered as you walked through that door, But still I swore To hide the pain, While I turned back the pages. Shouting might have been the answer, What if I cried my eyes out and begged you not to depart? But now I'm not afraid to say what's in my heart. 'Cause a thousand words call out through the ages, They'll fly to you, Even though I can't see, I know they're reaching you, Suspended on silver wings. Oh a thousand words, One thousand embraces, Will cradle you, Making all of your weary days seem far away. They'll hold you forever. Oh a thousand words (a thousand words), Have never been spoken (ohhh yeah), They'll fly to you, They'll carry you home (carry you home), And back into my arms, Suspended on silver wings (On silver wings), And a thousand words (ohh), Call out through the ages (call through the ages), They'll cradle you (oh yeah) Turning all of the lonely years to only days (only days), They'll hold you forever... Oh... One Thousand Words...